All Comments on 'Birthday Humiliation'

by Anjil_Lover

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
To be continued?

I do hope so! This was a great start to what promises to be a great story; you must carry on with it! 5 *s, as a little incentive!

Thank you, Anjil_Lover.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Yes, please continue.

This is a nice start. Well written, if not terribly original. I'm looking forward to seeing if you are a little more creative in the second part.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
WOW!!

Such an intriguing beginning. I hope to hear a lot more!

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