Tyler's Spring Break in April

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Just found out how to turn on the public comments board. Anyways, tell me what you all think guys, it might convince me to get started on more. I just love hearing what you think of my work, so drop a line here, or leave me some feedback, thanks!!

Was hot

Nice story would like to read more about these two.

really hot story

I hope you do a second one this one was hot good story

really HOT

Hope u write a sequal

So what are you waiting for?

Give us another one! This was great! I see you wrote it in July '02, sheesh, it's time for a follow-up story already. You seem to have a knack for the older woman/younger man genre, so I'd like more of that. Either a direct sequel to this story, or another Aunt/Nephew duo, or maybe a stepmother/stepson, or just any other kind of "virginal young man being seduced by a hot big-breasted older woman" story. I love those. So keep it up!

-Simon Kirby Jr

write more

what you waiting write more

HOT STORY

MADE MY DICK PUMP A GALLON

Damn

That was a damn hot story... I only wish I had been alone to enjoy it more fully! Needless to say, I think the public deserves more like it.

Good Job for a Virgin!

It was very well written. Thank you! I look forward to more from you.

More please!

I realize this is a longshot, considering how long it's been since the author wrote this, but if he ever sees it, just know that I would love to see more from him. A sequel to this story would be awesome, or even a new story, preferrably another Aunt/Nephew tale, would be appreaciated.

Constructive comments....

Very good job!

For your first submission, I liked it a lot....the story was not as long as I had hoped.....I think you ended it way too quick. You definately had me going for most of the story, wishing I was there, the one in the pool, rubbing oil on her back working my way to her wonderful ass.....WOW! What nice thoughts, erotic thoughts....if you write more with same charaters....make the story longer, play it out more, definately have the talent to keep my interests....
Thanks

very nice

this one caught my eye because my name is tyler and i am a 19 year old freshmen in college lol get write keep it up

HOT STORY!!!

Well written. I enjoyed the story-line. Now finish telling us about thier relationship. There has to be more!

great story

i used to read from my free sex stories they never had great stries. im looking forward to reading more of your stories. i like descriptive longer blowjob parts,but besides that very hot story.

Entertainment.

Every entertaining story, I loved it. You also got a laugh from this 40K player with the Dark Angels reference. Hope to read more from you.

great story

Really good story. Made me wish I had been there. My cock was so hard when I was reading it. Thanks. Hope to read more of your stories.

mmm....good

loved it, made me really wet... can't wait till my b/f gets home

Wow really great

great story gotta love hot Aunts

HOT

I wish I had a Aunt like that, what a way to learn about sex

I always loved this story

The description of Aunt April and her seductive ways is fantastic.