All Comments on 'Football Practice Ch. 03'

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lucci53lucci53almost 13 years ago
good......

but this feels unfinished, like you left it half way through a chapter. I mean this not as a criticism but as a plea for more, maybe involving a physical development of the relationship between Alice and Dave. Keep writing :)

austin_voyaustin_voyalmost 13 years ago
Agreed

This definitely has much more to it.

mikey04mikey04almost 13 years ago
love this series

please keep it up this series rocks

abc101abc101over 12 years ago
great story

please write more

Nephlim14Nephlim14over 8 years ago
YES!!!

Finally a little gender equality in a cfnm story. Please keep it going!

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