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Alicia Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/13/11

Good start!

This may turn into the typical sub story, but it has the feel of a story that has more to it and might well be worth the read even if this type of story is not really my style. I look forward to where you are going to take it.

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by Dryhill10/24/11

YES A GOOD START

A very good opening chapter with believeable characterizations. Lets hope the next few chapters hold up to the promise of this opener.

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