All Comments on 'In the Chains of Omphale Ch. 00'

by SeleucusNicator

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
It would be something....

If you could have Hera somehow seduce Hercules and Megara....but that would be quite hilarious!

Great start to your story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I'd like to see what happens next

Pretty good for a prologue. There are many possibilities of what can happen next

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Great For a prologue

But there really are a lot of directions you can take Heracles so you should try to do more. Because I really liked how you could make this erotic but still be faithful enough to the original myth.

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