All Comments on 'Happy Ending'

by tcwild100

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PennLadyPennLadyalmost 13 years ago
Well written

Why did he have to be married, though? It's a personal thing for me, I realize, but a story like this really loses something when one of the partners is cheating. But more than that, it's brought up and then just dropped, so why bring it up?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
,,,,WOW, MICHELE IS HOT & READY FOR MORE REAL SATISFACTION & NOW !!!

,,,Good writing, however, this is about an insatiable Hottie rather than a "happy ending", so write some stories about Michele's dream job as the erotic F*** masseuse at the beach bar at Hilton's African nudist swingers resort near Miami ..& she is live on the internet 24/7 ..Michele loves mounting the huge horse-size hung Nigerian basketball players..she is popular and averages 20 half hour "sessions" per day..what fun..Looking forward to Michele's "massage" stories ,,Thanks ,,,,,,::::::,,,,,,,::::::::

scubasam61scubasam61almost 13 years ago
great story but

I enjoyed the story and other then the anal part - pussy instead

I have had several of these types of great massages.

One thing if the anal action-massage was at her private house then why the concern and why do you need a lobby?-

She held a finger up to her lips and left the room. Gotta make it look normal, just in case I thought. I finished dressing, then waited a couple of minutes before I opened the door and walked out into the 'lobby'.

Reading HE Chapter 2 Thanks for writing the stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Very Good

Excellent story, short but sweet. Enjoyed it very much.

However, for the life of me I don't understand why people like scubasam61 would even read a story in the ANAL category if they don't want to read about anal, and then they complain about it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Hot but why cheating?

I agree with PennLady - it does lose something because of the infidelity. The story however is very sexy and wonderfully written. Thank you TC! Please write more in this series!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
very good

I thought it was well written and very erotic as well I wish I had a masseuse like her I would go every week good job on writing the story

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