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by Anonymous06/16/11

Get a new editor

If you are going write in English, get an editor who can help with your spelling and grammar. Ireadit missed a lot of errors, and didn't help with sentence structure.

I really hate a society that places parents standing in the community above a child's welfare. If this is a true story, it's no wonder the poor girl is traumatized, with no one having any understanding of what she is going through.

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by Anonymous06/17/11

rubbish story

a very poor effort

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