just to let you know, most women dont fell the cum in their stomachs. i for sure dont. i don know bout you or other women but to me the whole feeling the cum in the stomach seem a little far fetched. i can see the feeling of it trickling out but not the other. also try to be a little more descriptive with the sex. overall not a bad story but could use some work. interested to see what do next...
Can you please write a Chapter 3?! I know it's been awhile since you wrote this chapter but I hope you can continue this story!!!!!! Update soon please!!!!!!
If you want to answer, mumclaren@gmail.com
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Great story. I hope that you continue.
ok but coulfd be a little better
just to let you know, most women dont fell the cum in their stomachs. i for sure dont. i don know bout you or other women but to me the whole feeling the cum in the stomach seem a little far fetched. i can see the feeling of it trickling out but not the other. also try to be a little more descriptive with the sex. overall not a bad story but could use some work. interested to see what do next...
Chapter 3 Please?
Can you please write a Chapter 3?! I know it's been awhile since you wrote this chapter but I hope you can continue this story!!!!!! Update soon please!!!!!!
If you want to answer, mumclaren@gmail.com
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