It's No Big Deal

All I can say is

THANK YOU FOR A GREAT STORY.

Better

Your writing just keeps getting better. Good story, well told.

Fuck that was good.

Thank you.

Outstanding!

Good Tale!

Really a refreshing tale...

Unlike most Literotica tales in LW (which are garbage). Thanks.

Thanks 5*

Great read. Nice to see somerhing like this story.Wish there were more

Triple "M"

RULES!!!

Loved it

Cheers

Nicely written story about finding the one good woman he should have ended up with long ago. But if he had, would he have been as successful in business?

Home Run

Sometimes it's just a little happy story that hits the spot. Well Done.

Pleasant read, but not very exciting. I agree with the prior comment: would Gary have been as successful if he had found Charlotte earlier?

good piece of work

one of the better stories, you should keep going in this direction. stay away from chuckys

Almost guaranteed Romantic hit,

when MGM posts one! I really enjoy this author's work!

Thanks for not posting in LW

The cowards over there would bleat endlessly that "he was a wimp" and vote 1* because no women were maimed or killed. I enjoy your writing immensely primarily for one reason: Economy of words.

A lesser writer would string this out to fill 12 damn pages. Your ability to tell the same story in half the pages distinguishes you among your peers. Shakespeare said "Brevity is the soul of wit" so thank you for being brief.

TRUE LOVE IS ALWAYS A BIG DEAL

even when it takes for ever to surface. TK U MLJ LV NV

Thanks...

Well worth the read. Thanks for posting this story.

Great Story*****

Smooth reading with just enough drama. Thanks for sharing.

Great!

Just like life, isn't it.

fine tale.

Well done story, a little bit of everything wrapped into a fine post.

Nice story....Gary has a fountain of perserverance and it..

...paid off...but too bad the majority of people/women here were so shallow-it reminded me of something,um...oh yeah,-real life!

Wonderful ending -

Painfully like so many real life people there -

The deceit, the lack of respect, the unconscious neglect - it seems to be everywhere -

Go back to your roots, find the place to land - I wish it were that easy for us all -

I love happy endings...

There is a lot of pain out there, for both sexes. It is always good to see things end right sometimes. Yes, I realize that it is just a story.

LIFE AND ITS GOOD MEMORIES

are never far from home, TK U MLJ LV NV

a great little tale

sometimes you have to go through pain and a lot of sluts and whores to find the mate you want.....at least now is has a good position and a great girl.....loved it a very happy ending....

Sweet

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