All Comments on 'Pursuit of Happiness 01'

Great beginning and I will be patiently waiting for more. Joanna is a character you can begin to fall in love with. I wonder who will catch her wolfs attention Michael or Nate. Is Lyssa ability keeping her from conceiving?

Again welcome back and keep up the excellent writing.

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Im glad you brought my favorite couple back.

i am so happy you are posting again I have so missed Lyssa and Emmett

Great start and i can not wait for the next chapter

yay and we get more of emmet and lyssa. let's see what you have for us this time around :))

that you have "finally" start to post the continuing love story of Lyssa and Emmett. I can already see a few problems in thier future. It will be fun to watch the bad guys try and use Lyssa and her ability. They have no idea of what this mated pair will do to them. Or at least that's what I hope.

I'm so looking forward to the next chapter!

I'm glad your back. I enjoyed the first chapter in the further adventures of Lyssa and Emmett. Please hurry and post the next chapter.

Are we looking forward to Joanna's story this time? Hope so...

Also very happy to see Lyssa and Emmett back again too!

Take care

I love this story, but still have some issues about your use of tenses and the way that you differentiate between different scenes.

You can totally ignore me (that's fine!) or I can help, if you want.

Take care

Flora

i think i see a few of the things that are coming, and if they come to fruit, a hell of a story is going to be told, and , it is my opinion , lyssa is going to end up rather important in the end, to all the were's

I can't believe they finally had sex!!lol

it's all good. happy that you are back. this was a great start. the pressure is on! lol

I've read most of the trilogy and I have to admit its a great series; I love Jo and her future mate (I don't want to give anything away) but I feel like your stories have much going on at once and it's hard to keep up. To be honest I think each couple should have their own story. I loved what I read but I wasn't able to concentrate.