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by twelveoone06/14/11

Jack Kevorkian is dead

All's well that end's well? Interesting writing, could benefit from some condensation. A5

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by Desejo06/16/11

Intriguing

The layout is unexpected, but it works and gives the poem a very unique feel. This made me pause, read it again. Love "an afterword to a non contemporary book" and the image of some old guy eating granola and broiled catfish. I liked this.

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by anglosextantyen4u01/28/12

Hi Koo

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