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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/16/11

Hope you continue this one!

It's got the makings of a great beginning. I'd love to know the rest of the story.

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by Anonymous06/16/11

me too

more please

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by spearman106/16/11

MORE!!!

Please continue!!!!

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by DoctorWolf06/16/11

Hell yes!

That was a fun exciting read - please keep it coming. There has to be a backstory there.

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by mikothebaby06/18/11

sorry

but it was a little bit lacking - no plot, no intrugue, nothing to go on - hot sex only goes so far

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by cantfightfate06/18/11

Nice start.

Hope you make it a series.

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by bearmad196307/22/11

Good Story

Good start.
Please write another chapter soon.

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by SrahFox05/17/15

Finally part 3

Finally after a long long break I continued this story. Chapter two is called "Lost", the new Chapter 3 is called "Stranger".

https://www.literotica.com/s/stranger-2 5

Thank you to everyone who waited so long.

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by Anonymous09/08/16

Wonderful

Excellent work. The descriptions seem to parallel persistent arousal disorder.

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by SrahFox09/22/16

The story is finally done!!

So, after an unexpectedly long time I'm finally finished with this story. The forth and final story named "Found" can be found at
https://www.literotica.com/s/found-10
For anyone wanting the order it's Heat, Lost, Stranger and Found. I hope it's been worth the wait.

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