Damn If I Know

WTF was that?! maybe you should quit writing

Epilogue aka Follow-Up

You need to let this come to an end and let everyone Including your Character what it was all about
Damn If I Know!

Need an editor

leaper: one who leaps or jumps.

leper: on afflicted with leperosy.

Nice little vignette

It's complete! Doesn't need any more. Just fine!

Enjoyable and well done

If we really listened to what is said in the title, there would be no need to read more. The rationalists will keep up a chorus of Incomplete, Incomplete and I admit that midway through my thought was, "this is great suspense". The many poets if they read prose on here will really feel this one which could be easily transformed into the other genre.

Leperosy

Anonymous folk who criticise spelling should be really Really Careful that they themselves . . . . .

In Australia, it IS spelled criticise, by the way, but leprosy is the same the world over.

Spellchecked three times,
Yours,
Kilroy.

Why did I bother to read this?

Damn if I know.

AHHHHHHHHHHH!

I know curiosity killed the cat but if I was in that situation I would have to know why or it would drive me crazy. So, if that was your goal, you've succeeded. Nice work

why did you stay with such a bitch

Damn if I know........lol

OK

Well, she calls him a "sick prick" so that probably means she caught him cheating or looking at porn.

DUH, here's a thought. How about asking a direct question instead of Mickey Mouse games? Damn if anyone knows.

Just because JPB gets away with unfinished stories (sometimes) doesn't mean everyone should try it.

Too close to home

What happens is that you finally start snooping on her and find out you were wrong, and that she has been cheating on you for years.

Is there a story in here?

All I read was a series of barely connected statements. Sure no story there/

OK Outline

I assume you mistakenly posted the raw outline for a story. Lots of potential but nothing realized as yet.

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and......

Your command...

of the language is underwhelming.

damn if I know....

Damn if I know why you bothered to post this directionless drivel.

If you had a plot it would have been much better.

If this is part of a multi-page story, then you should let us know at the end of the page with "to be continued".

As it is, it sucks because it goes no where and does nothing.

Why did I read this? Damned if I know!

Very unsatisfying. I do not mind vignettes or flash stories but this one is too glib. There had to be a reason behind her attitude and comment "Well it's about time, you sick prick, and how soon can you be gone?"

very realistic.

a great wording of thoughts and concerns and considerations in dealing with shit

Absolutely vapid!

About as interesting as watching grass grow!

WOW!!!!!

Now I know I just wasted five minutes.

...PATTY IS OBVIOUSLY SAVING UP HER HORNINESS FOR HER NEW JOB .!!!

...Wow,good writing, now write some stories about Patty's 6 month job as the beach bar's erotic F*** masseuse at the African obese nudist swingers resort near Miami.Patty is popular & averages 20 half hour "sessions" per day & is live on the internet 24/7..Patty loves mounting the huge horse-size hung Nigerian basketball players..what fun ..Looking forward to Patty's hot humping "massage" stories ..Thanks,,,::::,,,,,

I think the story as a whole is well written

The story was a little confussing, and not really finding out what the problem was, 'why she wanted him to ask for a divorce' left the reader a little frustrated.

Perhaps a revisit to his story with the reason his wife wanted him out of her life, would make this first chapter make more complete.

Thanks for the post.

Is this a good story? -Damn If I Know!

Nuff said

POS

Piece of Shit

YOU COULD TRY ASKING

closeness and love is not an ally. TK U MLJ LV NV

?????

This was a whole lot of nothing.

a betrayal

fucked in the ass by a fat cock, smoked the big one, betrayed!

What the Fuck?

There are stories here that beg for more resolution, but this takes the cake.

WTF was the point in submitting that?!

I liked it

You got the wife down perfectly. And does why really matter? When it is over it is over.

Some portion of all divorces

The actual reason for the sudden actions of a spouse may never be known but as this story clearly indicates eveyone must decide when to end an intolerable stiuation.
More common in the US than you may think.

That's it ??

Why did I read this stupid story...Damn if I know!

wtf

FTDS. Is that it; the extent of your literary talent is this, whatever it is. Come on man finish it or don't ever write anything again

Why...

...did I bother reading this? Were you trying to amuse your readers with a literary joke or something? Damn if I know. But I do know that I found no substance in it. Sorry.

I don't know what this is rated but if it's over a 1

you got lucky. I would definitely include this in the 10 worst stories on the site.

Negative Cpmments

I do not understand why so many negative comments, maybe it is to realistic so many relationships end in divorce with both parties wondering how they got there. He could not uncover a reason for his wifes attitude so he embarks on a tit for tat approach which simply made a bad situation worse, oh! so real life. There should be more chapters because for everything there is reason, maybe she did just want out of the marriage and could not pluck up the courage to say or possibly the onset of a mental illness altering her behaviour. We are all fragile human beings and none of us are as tough as we like to believe. So it's a good story about how not to deal with a problem and merits more chapters by this author or another.

Yep...

...just another standard run of the mill fucking harpy cunt.

wht

Why did he leave, tell her to get the fuck out as why should he suffer. If she doesnt leave start throughing her clothes out. Let the bitch realize she lost everything they have. Cancel everything online that can be instantly. Protect all assets as she will be prepared by her words.

damn?

damned if you do damned if you don't, i'l be damned
is this correct?
damned if i know!

KNOWING OR NOT KNOWING

that be the question, but it ain't over till its fat lady time, TK U MLJ LV NV