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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone06/15/11

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line six, i can image a woman may be interested, further down the line I can imagine the sound of snores. i.e. not yours.
I can't say for sure, anon buddy thinks I don't have much, and who am I to disagree?
I didn't vote

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by Corpse_rider06/15/11

Holy Diver!

I disagree with Twelveoone. I think it's good to line 9 (as you watch TV). The poem, for me, ends there. The rest should be in a prose piece.

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by UnderYourSpell06/15/11

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well I read it through hoping to find some sort of tittilation but sorry it was not forthcoming ........ prose with line breaks does not a poem make

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