Please Cowboy? Ch. 05

Great Story!!

This story has definitely peaked my interest. Can't wait to see where it goes from here.

MORE???

Oh please tell me that you are going to add to this.

well damn

giddy up cowboy! loved this update, just keeps getting better.

i can honestly say, i had no idea the events you told happened in the past untill the end. that's something you might want to make a bit clearer. otherwise well done.

I enjoyed the chapter, although I agree that I didn't know that you we in the pass.

yes i agree with first two

you might wanna clarfied when you talking about past and present cause i was confused but beside that cant wait for the next chapter im starting to really like this keep it coming soon i hope

ok

I'm liking this story just started reading it and can't wait to read more but I did figure out the last chapter and that some of it was from the past though anyway please update again soon thanks!!

Thank you.

Thank you so much. I know I bothered you to hurry up with another chapter, but it is much appreciated. I am totally looking forward to much more.

need more

so in love with this novel.... please dont keep us waiting for the next chapter. PLEASE!!!

please cowboy

do u know ive been reading this story for months and u take to long to put each chapter out . please be faster cause once u send the other out u have to go re read the rest so u can remember whats happening . but i still love it keep it up and keep them coming faster

Too stupid

She's four months pregnant and he picks her up and throws her over his shoulder on her stomach and then later on as she tries to get away he trips her so that she falls on her stomach. Does he actually want her to have this child?

for Anonymous(so stupid)

You knew that was a flashback right?

confusing

I like this story, but it is all over the place, you should use editors... please the grammar really takes away from the dialogue... that being said I kind of like your style, it's nice and edgy. You have gotten your story up here so that says a lot about you material. please really read over your stuff TWICE, I can talk because I made several of the same mistakes you have, rushing to get my story out and so many errors took away from the plot. But I still enjoy your work.

What the hell is this story?! She rufies him and then he rapes her when she's pregnant! Can't continue.

Love this story