All Comments on 'Sara-dipity'

I really like this story line I hope you continue or give something a little more to end it???.....

Yes, it is more "cutesy" than my other stories (posted under the screen name EmeraldEye) but I'm getting warmed back up after 3 years away from writing. My next story involves a bachelorette and her future mother-in-law...stay tuned!

Any story with a cute brunette is good by me. Keep writing, please.

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EE2, this is a very pleasant experience. Fun to read a well written and succinct modern fairytale. Looking forward to more postings from you.

The story was nice, but I did not like the ending where he unceremoniously dumps his fiancé. A better ending would have been that he had created a fictitious fiancé to get his family off his back about needing to settle down, but then fell for Sara and convinced her to turn fiction into reality.

Thank you, there are times when I really need a genuinely funny story.