All Comments on 'The Cabin Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
A Fantastic Fellatrix!

Lucia, you just keep getting better and better! I live for each and every one of your stories, no better way to get off in the morning than to have a great story to read along with my coffee. Keep up the great work and thanks!

Thunderhead69Thunderhead69almost 13 years ago
Ahh...Mia Bella Lucia

What a great story to start a possible series. Great buildup to a fantastic blowjob for Angelo, I only wish it were me! I wait with great anticipation for the next chapter. You rock, Lucia!

BarbaraBarbaraalmost 13 years ago
A potential Literotica prize winning submission! Brilliant & absorbing erotic tale, sensual yet demanding readership voting support, given sensitive treatment by a multi-talented writer.

Mysterious characters have created genuine sexual tension, for a forcibly abducted 'femme/domme' fellatrix Lucia, perfectly epitomising some erotic situations for garnering ongoing loyal female readership in future! Allowing for both 'fetish genre' exploration and serial continuity, for expert 'erotica reader's jaded imaginations, please continue to tittilate your readers with this ongoing saga?

ballznall60ballznall60almost 13 years ago
Another great tale from Literotica's #1 Fellatrix!

Cannot wait for the continuation of this story, Lucia. You certainly know how to write not only how to be an excellent cocksucker but also how the recipient of you ministrations evolves emotionally. An old Italian man and a young beautiful Italian woman: perfect combination for a cock hardening story! Also delighted to see your picture back up in your bio. Would also be a great treat to see more of your gorgeous body!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

great story but the Italian needs a little work, ragazzo and you can't just use capire as a verb without conjugating it...other than that, great work

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Please continue

Gimmie summore - you no. 1 cocksucker.

p.s. Should last line have read grin and a wank?

GingerVyeGingerVyeover 11 years ago
hot as hell

oh fuck yes this is hot, my body is like hers and I would love to suck off a sexy older man and make him weak with desire, when I was 21 I kissed a 63 year old man in the back seat of his BMW and made him cum without even touching his cock. He told me he couldn't get it up because of some medical condition, but he had no problem when he got with my sexy young body. What a hot story, your attention to detail is great, and her boyfriend, what a little wussbag, there are too many guys like that out there. Great characters!

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