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A Darkness Returns to Light Ch. 01

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by Anonymous06/19/11

Good Start

Good start for a 1st time author.
I like the humourous tone.
Looks like a fun story.

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by Anonymous06/19/11

Great Start!

I'm looking forward to his reaction.

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by Anonymous09/12/11

great story hope to see it continued soon

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by Anonymous03/10/12

Ouch out for a to go meal sucks here LOL

Man what a bitch and the she sucks too..


LOL

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by Anonymous02/01/14

oh boy!

Just Carvers' like ! He just HAS to find Vampires !

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by Anonymous07/21/14

just a comment

whoa, that last part give me shivers, anyway, nice story, look forward to read more

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