All Comments on 'My Mother's Bondage Phantasy'

Is there going to be more parts?

Can't explain why, it just didn't.

But please try again

Can't explain why, it just didn't.

But please try again

If there are going to be more parts, get an editor. Fantasy is spelled with an F, not a P-H!

You wrote that you ejected the DVD, then noticed the label was not the original, and put it back into the player, "noting the current location", before pressing play.

That's the sequence for a Video Cassette in a VCR, not a DVD. When you first ejected the disc, the "current location" would have reset.

So, I'm guessing you swapped acronyms without bothering to think about it? No offense, and there were a lot of other mistakes in this story, but it's details like that which can really distract you from the story, you know?

:-(:) vg :) f2f gfs Dr!

...the comment about Fantasy spelled with an F instead instead of a PH sounded picky but then the the comment on DVD vs tape didnt???

I guess Phantasy sounded intentional

Good luck Derrick

Moree

The storyline itself was pretty good but for god sake if you had an editor it would’ve been more enjoyable to read….⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️