All Comments on 'Kinky Boat Ride'

Give up writing

not worth reading

Like to read more.

Don't worry about the previous anonymos comments.

What I find most surprising is that in the end you don't have your main character sleeping with mom. Few authors can resist that temptation at that point, so great job there. I would quibble with how long you are spanking Mom, that's significant time to strike flesh, but overall this is a great start to what I hope will be a great series. Keep it up. And agreed, ignore the anonymous comments.

Your mother should spank you, that is what you really need.

People that can't write critisise. Excellant story line that could easily be made into a series.

Well you can't just leave it there like that.

We need ti see how Mom responded the next day.

pretty good story, but i just hate it, when we're all left hanging, waiting for the next chapter that never comes