by StolenCandi
V3
And a great start! More please..........................
But way too short and what a place to have a cliffhanger lol
Write more ASAP!!!
I'm loving it, cant wait for more :)
I'm really feeling this first chapter. Keep i up.
this chapter came off very slut shamey. I will read on and see what happens though.
waste your time or invest yourself
story is 5 years dead & unfinished
good premise, but really really really needs an editor