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The Palm of your hand

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by Anonymous

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by Koba06/19/11

Beautiful!

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by GuiltyPleasure06/19/11

Agreed......

...beautiful, with feeling.

Tess + 5

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by greenmountaineer06/19/11

Very effective use of repetition; sensual; nicely done.

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by Anonymous11/23/12

*****

Extraordinary. No, more than that.

Five.

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