All Comments on 'Weighty issues'

by Desejo

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buttersbuttersalmost 13 years ago
wonderful

the best from you i've read, inasmuch as it's stripped of any excess, it engages from the off, it's clear clean imagery and intelligent point-making. i really like this one a lot.

greenmountaineergreenmountaineeralmost 13 years ago

This is smart. It elicits a reaction and makes me examine why I come to believe the things I believe. The conversational tone of it is also very effective.

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellalmost 13 years ago
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Excellent! worth wading through the dross to find this nugget ... a well deserved 5

HarryHillHarryHillover 11 years ago
A pleasant surprise

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Maria2394Maria2394almost 11 years ago
read it 5 times

and still do not "get it". So, are you fat or not? Is that the point? confusion?

Maybe this just isn't my style, vague and self deprecating. Keep writing, you will improve :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
*****

I read it, and I think I get it. No, she's not fat, and no, she's not thin.

Five.

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