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Tangea Ch. 01

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by Anonymous08/01/11

Very good

it was great, can't wait to read more

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by quiverclaw08/01/11

Interesting.

I look forward to reading more, and I hope the subsequent chapters are much longer. This one barely covered introductions before you left us hanging at the end. I realise this sounds harsh but when your just getting into the story and then the chapter ends, well I'm sure you get what I'm saying.

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by lilwolfspirit08/02/11

Mmmm

Very interesting start and would love to read more.

Donna.

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