All Comments on 'Carnal Adventure Ch. 01'

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MizTMizTalmost 13 years ago
Jumped In

You really jumped in with both feet with this story. No beating around the bush. Let's have mad sex and then ice cream. That had me laughing so hard, it was a cold finish to a hot story.

I will be watching for the next chapter to see what flavor ice cream they have. I still find that line funny!

deliciousthoughtsdeliciousthoughtsover 11 years ago
wonderful

so inventive... so well written... so sexy :)

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