I like this.
It's a great erotic buildup or foreplay to their fucking.
This is good:
"...He teases her by only sliding in to the first knuckle, denying her the feeling of fullness. Amazed by the juices running from her, he slowly and agonizingly teases her pussy.
"Jack off your clit for me. Take it between your fingers and show me how you cum."
Obeying him, she grasps her clit like a tiny cock and strokes the shaft for him. Sliding his finger in deeper, he feels her orgasm beginning to build. Moving his face closer, ...
pu
That's neat how he teases her pussy with his fingers.
You need to write a 2nd chapter, a follow-up that describes their fucking.
Imagine he'd proceed like he did with the foreplay.
After she tells him she's ready, she spreads her legs even wider, displaying her beautiful pussy in all its glory.
He moves his hungry cock closer to her.
As he prepares to enter, he stops it, poised just outside her labia. It's touching her but he doesn't go in any deeper.
"What's wrong?" she asks, fearing he doesn't desire her. "Why don't you go in? I wanttttt you.... Fuck me..."
He obeys and slowly moves it in, as if she's a virgin who'd never taken a guy before.
She wraps her arms around him, holding him tight, and tightens her grip on him, hoping to help push him in.
He doesn't enter so fast though. While he's not positioned on the outside anymore, his forehead's only in the "entry way" or opening, not inside more than an inch or so.
He moves it in and out, but not going in any deeper.
Amazed at his restraint, she's never had a guy with such discipline or fear of entering all the way. All the other guys she fucked went straight for her pussy after she opened her legs wide for them. And she expected him to enter too and fuck the life of her, just like the others.
" ... oh... I want you in me... ALL the way...." she tells him as he moves in and out, but only in the entry area. She wraps her arms around him even more and he can feel her love or concern for him.
"You do?" he asks as he moves it in a little deeper, not all the way in, but still, more than before.
"...ummmm" she responds, acknowledging his deeper penetration.
He pushes it in more, but before going deeper, unexpectedly pulls it out.
There he is, poised again outside her hot pussy, but instead of going in like other guys, he waits. She looks at him confused but he relents and goes in deeper.
Deeper than before.
" OMG.... go in more..." she tells him.
He's not like any other and his penis is giving her sensations no other guy gave her.
He begins thrusting more deliberately and she can feel his thunderous moves as he moves in and out.
This time, he doesn't pull-out completely, but without restraint, moves it in and out, fucking the life of her.
She gets into it more and moves her abdomen with his rythmn as he pushes his hungry cock deeper into her loving pussy, which he can't seem to satisfy. She wants more of him and they can't get enough of each other.
They fuck for what seems like hours, though in reality, he lasts for almost an hour.
Unable to hold-back any longer, particularly after she locks her loving vaginal muscles against his cock, he's close to cumming.
After some grunts of satisfaction, he makes his final moves and thrusts his long, big penis into more as he sends his warm, sperm-laden cum deep into her.
As he quivers and thunders his penis into her shooting his cum into her without protection, she holds him even closer and kisses him repeatedly.
"OMG... that was the best any guy has ever made love to me," she tells him as he begins to withdraw.
As he removes himself, she notices his penis remains hard.
English
Beautiful!
This is gorgeous. I loved it.
very erotic build up...
I like this.
It's a great erotic buildup or foreplay to their fucking.
This is good:
"...He teases her by only sliding in to the first knuckle, denying her the feeling of fullness. Amazed by the juices running from her, he slowly and agonizingly teases her pussy.
"Jack off your clit for me. Take it between your fingers and show me how you cum."
Obeying him, she grasps her clit like a tiny cock and strokes the shaft for him. Sliding his finger in deeper, he feels her orgasm beginning to build. Moving his face closer, ...
pu
That's neat how he teases her pussy with his fingers.
You need to write a 2nd chapter, a follow-up that describes their fucking.
Imagine he'd proceed like he did with the foreplay.
After she tells him she's ready, she spreads her legs even wider, displaying her beautiful pussy in all its glory.
He moves his hungry cock closer to her.
As he prepares to enter, he stops it, poised just outside her labia. It's touching her but he doesn't go in any deeper.
"What's wrong?" she asks, fearing he doesn't desire her. "Why don't you go in? I wanttttt you.... Fuck me..."
He obeys and slowly moves it in, as if she's a virgin who'd never taken a guy before.
She wraps her arms around him, holding him tight, and tightens her grip on him, hoping to help push him in.
He doesn't enter so fast though. While he's not positioned on the outside anymore, his forehead's only in the "entry way" or opening, not inside more than an inch or so.
He moves it in and out, but not going in any deeper.
Amazed at his restraint, she's never had a guy with such discipline or fear of entering all the way. All the other guys she fucked went straight for her pussy after she opened her legs wide for them. And she expected him to enter too and fuck the life of her, just like the others.
" ... oh... I want you in me... ALL the way...." she tells him as he moves in and out, but only in the entry area. She wraps her arms around him even more and he can feel her love or concern for him.
"You do?" he asks as he moves it in a little deeper, not all the way in, but still, more than before.
"...ummmm" she responds, acknowledging his deeper penetration.
He pushes it in more, but before going deeper, unexpectedly pulls it out.
There he is, poised again outside her hot pussy, but instead of going in like other guys, he waits. She looks at him confused but he relents and goes in deeper.
Deeper than before.
" OMG.... go in more..." she tells him.
He's not like any other and his penis is giving her sensations no other guy gave her.
He begins thrusting more deliberately and she can feel his thunderous moves as he moves in and out.
This time, he doesn't pull-out completely, but without restraint, moves it in and out, fucking the life of her.
She gets into it more and moves her abdomen with his rythmn as he pushes his hungry cock deeper into her loving pussy, which he can't seem to satisfy. She wants more of him and they can't get enough of each other.
They fuck for what seems like hours, though in reality, he lasts for almost an hour.
Unable to hold-back any longer, particularly after she locks her loving vaginal muscles against his cock, he's close to cumming.
After some grunts of satisfaction, he makes his final moves and thrusts his long, big penis into more as he sends his warm, sperm-laden cum deep into her.
As he quivers and thunders his penis into her shooting his cum into her without protection, she holds him even closer and kisses him repeatedly.
"OMG... that was the best any guy has ever made love to me," she tells him as he begins to withdraw.
As he removes himself, she notices his penis remains hard.
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