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Well done and 5 stars all around for content, style and pacing. THERE JUST HAS TO BE MORE FILES THAT NEED REVIEWING. THANKS.
excellent
Well crafted............. well thought out, good solid writing........
An excellent story
I am waiting anxious for your next story with Mrs. Hudson and hopefully some more.
Thank you.
great story
Really great story from start to finish,
Great writing
Top marks for the detail, teasing build-up, inventive metaphors and generally brilliant writing. There are some silly spelling mistakes, missing words etc. In there though. Probably worth 'employing' an editor to eradicate these in future stories (I know some people automatically score lower for this). Personally, I would have also left out the detail of the hidden wife from the story synopsis as this would have added an unexpected twist (just something I like in stories). Look forward to reading more of your work. Thanks for the top read and 5 stars.
More please
So hot so sexy please give us chapter 2 and 2
Very well written, very erotic story! Thanks!
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