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by Desejo06/21/11

Angel food cake and scones

Love this. It made me think, I love the word play, the references..and to top it all off, it made me imagine the whole scene. Very well done.

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by UnderYourSpell06/21/11

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Enjoyed this. A few nit picks .... 'bottom lip' doesn't need a hyphen and it would flow better if every line didn't start with a capital letter

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