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Nice work
A pretty damn good start. Another one soon I hope.
Nicely done!
Definitely makes me want to read more. It's a pleasure to welcome a very talented new author to Literotica.
The point of this story is? Left me unfulfilled, but I'll see if Part 2 is any better before reserving final judgment,
Thanks, chapter two is already in production :)
I can see why the story might leave you feeling unfulfilled, anonymous. I think this happened because I couldn't decide where to have the chapter change so now there's a load of questions that don't really go anywhere. Hopefully as it goes on stuff will make more sense.
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