All Comments on 'Come Into the Dark Ch. 03'

hmmmmmmmmmm i like this story i would like to see it grow some more i am not normaly into noconsent storys but this one has got my atention

please continue thank you for sharing oh ? will this story become a nohuman one it seems that in this chapter that william is more than he seems again thank you for sharing please continue.

nice.William... who is he?? and who 4D01is anna?? you mentioned that name a couple times. maybe you meant jennifer?

I can't wait for the next ch hope it comes soon. SO much mystery and an interesting way to enter someones life.

I agree with William I think him and jenifer make a great pair I can't wait to see the next chapter

great story

I really enjoyed that chapter. I'm enjoying the series i hope u plan to update soon.

this is a good story, after you get past the submission and master part-this is pretty goo.

good

I presume her name is Jennifer, but many times you called her Anna. I also think the story is kind of moving a little fast. Yeah I know they slept with each other the first night, but I would just like a little more mystery between them and more of a struggle on William's side. Other than that, great story.