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DesejoDesejoalmost 13 years ago
First -

I should thank you for a new Scrabble word - was unfamiliar with this particular spelling :)

Within these lines I get a sense of time, purpose, journey, and anticipation - all of which is relevant to the title. The only thing that confuses me a bit is the last line about reeds; just not sure what it refers to.

live4passionlive4passionalmost 13 years agoAuthor
convergence

Thanks for commenting Desejo. Reed? First in the literary/poetic sense meaning "arrow", while in the metaphorical signifying extraordinarily fragile yet resilient lives, strokes of the pen even...

a depiction of the convergence of "uncommon destinies", or alternately, convergent destinies of "those uncommon"

Take your pick ;)

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
THE BEGINNING OF A JOURNEY

to meet up with the main, TK U MLJ LV NV

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