Signing up to be a Sex Slave Ch. 01

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Please continue this series, I'm all hot!

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Interesting and ready for more especially inthe training to be a "pony girl".

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I should add here that my wife tried and was pleased with the "pony girl" fun she enjoyed it often.

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And if anyone is interested inwhat happened write me at

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story line is good

I will be interested in reading more of this story when it comes out. I do hope you do more proof reading before you submit it though. In the very beginning she was Amber, then Ashley for the next sentence, then back to Amber. Other sentences had to be read a second time to understand what you were trying to say. I think you had something in mind and then changed your wording but didn't delete the whole sentence first. A little more attention to details like that and this story will soar.

hotttttttttttttttttttt

Love this situation. College jealousy turned to revenge. Already i am juicing like a so cal orange, can hardly wait for next chapter. Please hurry!!!!

Shot my editor.

So in response to the Amber/Ashley thing. Apologies, this is actually my first stab into the world of writing, and was toying around with a lot of names, I was so excited when I finished I didn't proof read very well. I am pretty ashamed of such a glaring omission. I have part two submitted and pending.

Thanks for all the positive feedback, I really appreciate it. Be sure and check out my other story I have out too. I'll keep writing them if you keep reading them.

A hot story

I like your writing and your style. And I really hope you don't keep us waiting too long for part 2.

keep writing!

What a bitch

What a bitch Veronica is, I hate her already. Surely some payback is due to Amber here. How will the company react when they realise what Veronica has done? It's hardly good for their business...

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Oh No !!

Brilliant, can only hope for more instalments !!