the story would be better though if the slave had a name
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Anonymous07/01/11
a rare treat
the first paragraph was enough for this girl...in a good way...a VERY good way. pee play is so very dirty...so very submissive...it took me to a delicious place... then i read more...oh my, i won;t spoil it for anyone...but lord, i have come, and will come back to this tale again... mmmm.... Ax
and what a perfect dream come true it'd be for this pet! you have encapsulated some to all, of what it could and most certainly can be like, for one who desires to be in a position such as the one you present. i say thanks again and again. you are such a fun and talented writer. with a sweet and sexy respect, lmj
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that was great
the story would be better though if the slave had a name
a rare treat
the first paragraph was enough for this girl...in a good way...a VERY good way. pee play is so very dirty...so very submissive...it took me to a delicious place... then i read more...oh my, i won;t spoil it for anyone...but lord, i have come, and will come back to this tale again... mmmm.... Ax
an exquiste dream of a tale. . .
and what a perfect dream come true it'd be for this pet! you have encapsulated some to all, of what it could and most certainly can be like, for one who desires to be in a position such as the one you present. i say thanks again and again. you are such a fun and talented writer. with a sweet and sexy respect, lmj
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