by Domwoolf
a crazy good story, i love the twist u added at the end, ur good author ill have check out more of ur work
Usually I hate women with piercings but in this story I didn't mind. The stroy and characters were great and I loved the twist at the end. I look forward to hearing more.
P.S Nice note at the beginning. Takes some balls for that.
not real background and no end just a twisted rush to ugly forced sex then a rush to incest. delete and rewrite adding the background slowing down this part and adding a proper end.
It is not an old Johnny Cash song (he did make a cover of it).
It is an old Kris Kristofferson song. Yes, the guy from Blade.
Sunday Morning Coming Down.
Small insignificant detail is all, in an otherwise nice story.
i like your story the only thing I would do different is explain how the sister got preggers because you said that she got snipped did the doc snip the wrong part