The Freak

Fun read

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great stuff

a crazy good story, i love the twist u added at the end, ur good author ill have check out more of ur work

A great read.

delightful

a joyful time was had by the characters and the readers, too.

Good Work

Usually I hate women with piercings but in this story I didn't mind. The stroy and characters were great and I loved the twist at the end. I look forward to hearing more.

P.S Nice note at the beginning. Takes some balls for that.

Great Job

A little different, but I liked it a lot. Nice ending.

so-so

not real background and no end just a twisted rush to ugly forced sex then a rush to incest. delete and rewrite adding the background slowing down this part and adding a proper end.

Hell I loved it.

Johnny Cash

It is not an old Johnny Cash song (he did make a cover of it).

It is an old Kris Kristofferson song. Yes, the guy from Blade.

Sunday Morning Coming Down.

Small insignificant detail is all, in an otherwise nice story.

Ending

i like your story the only thing I would do different is explain how the sister got preggers because you said that she got snipped did the doc snip the wrong part