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Enjoyable
Thanks, I liked your story. It was humorous, witty, and overall an enjoyable read. And thanks for staying away from the character having an megalomaniacal ego. Again thanks it was a fun read.
Bainsidhe
Definitely Different
But in a good way. a little zany, off the wall fun
one thing wrong.....
Totally loved it. Good work hope to get the chance to read more of your stuff.
However I love disney. They are great classics and my childhood memories so while I loved the story I feel bad about reading an erotica with disney in it.
Nothing against the author or any of my fellow readers just wanted to say it.
Amazing
All of your stories are quite clever, but this one was just simply amazing in my opinion.
A Fun Take on an Old Idea
Very well done. I really liked the way you ran with this idea. It's given me something to chew over for my own writing. Thanks.
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