by LadySneak
Well-written and very hot, I enjoyed this - every chapter of it - and my thanks for sharing your talents with us, reflected in a score of 5.
If there is one thing - isn't there always? - it is the clumsiness of W/we, Th/they and so on; I know it is probably 'PC' - although quite what 'PC' is doing in erotic fiction is a topic that might keep us busy a long time! - but it is unwieldy and doesn't help the flow of your wonderful prose.
That's all - apart from the one little niggle, First-Class!