Knocked-Up Karen

Any feedback?

Does anyone have any feedback or suggestions? Are there any requests for more chapters?

I would think that a story about a nun giving birth to red headed twins would provoke discussion.

A bit rushed. But still,a good read.

Be more descriptive.

Good idea

I have written two prequels and a sequel to this story that are both from Karen's point of view. I am considering rewriting this chapter from Karen's POV in which case I can certainly include more detail.

Irish,

Just read your story loved it, was not long enough have you posted the sequel you mentioned, would love to read them

Nice

Only because of the category did I like this tale. I remember a couple of hot nuns when I was in grade school. I didn't fuck any though. Not that I remember anyway. I guess I drank too much back then.

Unrealistic, much

No convent is ever, ever going to allow postulants or novices to entertain young men in their rooms unless it's their brothers, and even then it would be closely supervised, and as for meeting young men unchaperoned, if at all, it would just never happen, so your main premise is bullshit for a start; check your facts, it'll make your life easier

careful what you ask for...

...Irishdudleydowrong, cause that's my boot up your arse.

I notice as you confuse ejaculating semen with manhood, that you express you perpetual infantile misogyny with nasty insults against your female characters.

The original use of terms such as slut and bimbo were a description of pathetic failures of masculinity such as yourself.

Perennial boys, cowardly denying your deep rooted sub-conscious homosexuality by assaulting females.

You are so far into the closet , we could call you a spelunker. So far up de-nial, you can see the Mountains of the Moon.

The Trolls Have Spoken

For those who criticize the writing of others, don't you have anything better to do?

If you don't like the subject material, find something you enjoy.

Really fanfare

I think fanfare is the closet gay. From reading his comments, I think he is a submissive who wants to suck the author's dick!