What To Do?

A day brightner for sure...

A very well written and uplifting story but I have come to expect that of D G Hear. Thanks.

Uplifting Story

As always a well constructed and readable story that finds the best in people and gives a lift for us suckers for romance

meh

nothing new, same type of story where guy is pristine and the girl is used goods, good guy settles and loses all his thinking powers over some pussy. I understand that maybe it could work but seriously way to far fetched.

once again, excellent work!

Heart-touching, on so many levels. Excellent! Write on!!!!

Nice story indeed.

I really liked this story. Those two belonged together. Too hard they had to do it the hard way.
Another great story.

Swing and a miss

Formulaic, mundane, unoriginal and uninteresting - having read all of your stories I know you are capable of writing a story much better than this

As Usual

DG, I look for your name on all new stories and enjoy reading them. Over time I read your stores multiple times.

Excellent Work!

Thanks for sharing your creativity with us.

Nice Tearjerker

DG knows how to do it right. The only problem is the need to tie up all the details in the last page without having any surprises for us.
But I would be happy to read one of these per day! Thanks.

There is name confusion on the second page around the Rob knife fight.

Jess is damaged goods. She was being banged by 3 guys without rubbers and Jerry had no problem going bareback without an STD test first? In the sequel Jess will be fucking Rob's cronies when they get out of jail on parole and cucking Jerry.

Nice Story

Despite someof the negative coments, I thought your story was very good. It actually felt more like an anecdote than fiction -- it seemed very real. Good Job.

I Liked It

Some may say boring and mundane but I say romantic and heartfelt. Oh wait, this is in the Romance category not the Dramatic Action Category. I enjoyed it and except for a little identity crisis between Jess and Jerr after the fight in the parking lot it read pretty smooth. What's a matter DG, get a little excited after your own fight scene. All in all it was a great Sunday evening family story that people of all ages could enjoy while munching popcorn. After the censors edit the sex scenes, of course. Thanks DG

redundant?

I'm afraid that DG Hear's stories have become redundant and somewhat formulaic. They are almost fill-in-the-blanks, write-by-numbers kinds of stories.

DG's stories are Lit's continuing resident soap operas.

The overall characters and formula are very similar from story to story, just the names and the background plot change. DG should take some chances and expand his field of play. He's a good writer but the claim he staked back in the beginning is starting to look a bit shabby

Time to go in a different direction.

DG Hear

About writing stories. After writing a couple of hundred stories there is no doubt that some plot lines may seem similar. I'm an amature writer and always will be. I write about situations around me or subjects that come into my head. For anyone who has read hundreds or more stories, you are bound to read about the same type of affairs, love interests and so on.

I try to make my characters real and with emotions. I always give you my best even though often times you may believe I fall short. For anyone who feels reading my stories is a waste of time, they can always bypass them and find one more to your liking.

I won't apologize for my stories. I write what I feel even if sometimes it might seem mundane. Thank you to all that read my stories and take the time to comment. I really do appreciate it.
With respect
DG Hear

DG I think it was a great story

For the chicken shits that hide behind ANONYMOUS and bad mouth them then like you said go find something else to read. I really enjoy your stories and the way they are written. Keep up the great work and don't worry about the those who bad mouth you.

Has a nice homey feel

DG, I like your style. I am new to the site although I did stumble over the site back around 00. I lost touch with it over a few puters. I'm glad I found it again and glad to read your contributions. They have the ring of truth in them. I wish I could accomplish what you seem to so easily produce.

Nice Job!

I have read Shakespeare, Dickens, Tolkien, Lovecraft, and most everything in between. I won't say you rank with the greats, but I see a great deal of promise. I look forward to more of your stories, and maybe even a book someday. Please keep exercising your talent, and entertaining your public. Thanks for a very good read!

Nice Story

Up to your usual good standard! I enjoyed the story a lot!!! Please keep the stories coming!!

Very Well-written Romance

Good to let the good guys win once in a while. DG stories are interesting and FUN to read, this one included. Well done!

I hit the wrong darn button - will re-submit as I dislike anon - Good story!

Good to let the good guys win once in a while. DG stories are interesting and FUN to read, this one included. Well done!

I enjoyed the read

the writing had a country flavor to it and I like that. Thank you

Very good stroy sir. I thank you sir.

I think you as a author are on the fringe of joining the ubarmasters on the site, DQS, HDK, x_John Doe_x and others of the the elite.

I myself probably never will take back my wife in those circumstances. Would I take back my wife? Probably not.

Another winner.

DG, you are one of the best writers on this site. I found it mildly amusing to see you compared to people who are just not in your league. A comparison to Jack (Jake Rivers), Dave (The Wanderer or Denham Forrest), or maybe even my old friend PAPATOAD might be valid, but you are too much of a gentleman to probably ever comment on such things. Thanks for all you do, DG, and thank you for another fine story!

A good story again

Dear author how are able to write the good stories step by step. We readers are glad to found them on Literotica and on Storiesonline. Unfortanetely some other authors rarelier write their chapters of sequels.

not up to your usual standard

Sorry, but I gotta say it.

different

Its different,but a very good story!

One word to destcribe this

Amazing

Kind DGHEAR you do not need apologize. You are a excelent amateur writer. Almost every your story was good which I read.

Jess had made her bed..let her sleep in it.

She choose to have sex with multiple men at his going away party and made herself, with no help, into a pregnant slut. Rob should of steered clear of her because she is bad news.

another woman-hating freak...

I refer, of course, to the previous commentator. Jess did not "choose" to have sex with multiple men the party. A nasty asshole got a naive girl drunk and high, took her sexually and handed her over to his friends. It was as close to rape as makes no big difference. She and the main character were not dating and she didn't betray anyone. She made a damn mistake, for which the previous jackass would like to see her miserable forever -- hey, any excuse to hurt a woman.

Bet he never had a date, lives in Big Mama's basement, is terrified of women, and seethes with resentment. Real men don't need to hurt women vicariously to feel strong.

Gutless ignorance

Fascinating that all the negative comments are put up my the 'Anonymous' things who do not have the courage to expose them selves and or their own abilities, if any.
When reading the 'Comments' I usually just jump over these twerps. as almost without exception they are totally unaware that these are "STORIES' .
Sorry, but several of the 'commenters' above showed how stupid they were.

Just keep it flowing

Tx, loved it

To 7/29/12.

Rape is a crime of violence,not fun' love or planninig for a
'good nite" out on the vioilated's behalf.
I pray you are never touched by such an act,If you have,please get help.A supportive family structure,is often the only way a victim get's back close to "normal"....

I want to add a different slant.

Since I was raised by hyper-religious fanatic parents (not that I did not love them) but I did not "like" my Mother because she was the main force behind all the dogma, the hyper-critical (yes, I inherited some of it) always right attitude I can state without fear of contradiction that Jessie's parents were the catalyst which led to her actions and that of her sister. She went to the party not knowing it was a Nude party. Her being cloistered by her parents made her naive and ignorant then she stupidly took two drinks, smoked dope and got screwed by at least three different men. Then her parents attitude forced her to live with this dope-dealing bastard who pushed her pregnant ass down the stairs. I blame a lot of it on her parents, especially her unforgiving father. What a deal! I know that it is just a story but this is acted out in real life more than you expect. I have known several preacher's daughters and daughters of strict parents run wild and I probably contributed a little to their actions as I was a wild child myself and did not start settling down myself until I was about 30. So give her a break. You negative people that condemn her out of hand and then do not sign your name. You are probably a secret pedophile yet criticize someone that was in a bad situation a long time. Show a little humanity, be kind to those who are needy and downtrodden. (End of rant, LOL.)

A well told tale -

Very homespun and folksey.

I enjoy reading stories that could happen - even more so when they turn out well for the right people.

We will all hope Rob, Al and Len get the justice they so richly deserve - cornholing in prison or on the streets and then a sad slow painful death.

Rob

why did they let Rob off the hook? He was the kingpin of the busted drug deal yet his flunkies paid the price.

he just let them rape her?

Having sex with someone while they Are under the effects of drug and alcohol is rape.

He just let it happen. Didn't call the police. Even though he knew she was drunk and drugged.
All because she didn't listen when he asked her not to drink? She was too naive to know what could happen, but he didn't.

"All that it takes for evil to succeed is for good people to do nothing."
The guy is a piece of trash and so is this story.

this guy is a complete and total tosser

he watched his so called best friend get drunk...drugged then rape....all he needed to do was call the police...but being the gutless asshole he is he allowed it to happen...and throughout he was just a typical cock hound fucking anything and everything married or single...he is a total slime ball...why she ever married him when he came back was a mystery...about the only decent thing was destroy the drugs but still that asshole escaped and his two side kicks got the rap for him....can only hope the drug baron caught up with him and necked him...all drug dealers should be executed for the sorrow and misery they bring to people....families and communities...vilest scum of the earth...

Another lit story full of scumbags

How is a story supposed to be enjoyable when all characters are scummy human beings. He's her friend, she chooses to defiantly do exactly the opposite of what he suggested. It was pretty shitty what happened to her but she made the fucking choice even after being warned, after knowing exactly the type of person rob was. Shitty but only on her and her users. As far as her parents? Never forgiven. You betray your own child I think you deserve a ETERNITY of fucking misery. She comes to her dad telling him that she was damn near raped after being drugged and he kicks her out and then his daughters apologize to him. Get fucking real. Disgusting when people apologize for someone else's fuck up. The mom didn't kick the dad in the head when he did this makes her just as scummy. Uncle bob knowing what his son did regularly and he let him. He can't do anything? Bullshit. He had tons of options and Fucking Chose to continue letting his son be a drug dealing rapist. Story full of asshats. Not enjoyable at all. Poor plot, completely unrealistic and unstomachable characters.
If you are warned of danger, know it's dangerous, and do it anyway, than the concequences are entirely on your shoulder. Should he have done more? Was she fighting back? Was she unconscious? Did she ask for help? Did she do anything but look away? What was he supposed to do? If he intervened or attacked the people having sex it would hqv just been assault on him since with her accepting what was happening to her he wouldn't be able to say he was saving her.