All Comments on 'Fucking Karima Ch. 01'

by TheFaceMan

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Hot

hot..keep going plz

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
future edits

In the future don't use so many "word ... word" and those long strings that intentionally alter the spelling of words should be stopped. Things like "oooohhhhhhhhh", "ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh", etc are but bad writing as the average person gets the meaning using the proper spelling of the words.

LolitaXXXLolitaXXXalmost 13 years ago
Mmmmmmmmm!!!

There's nothing so sexy as when a horny man can't help himself and has to dive right in and eat his woman up like she was a tasty treat! Mmmmmm..that's good!

LisaGerberLisaGerberalmost 13 years ago
awesome story!

Fuck that was so hot!! keep going please@!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Spell Check

Ever heard of it?

kellylevikellyleviover 12 years ago
mmmm

love this series!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great story

Loved the connection - seemed as if i was there in the story. Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
IN YOUR DREAMS

Your story is wishful thinking at most. It would never occur in actuality, and never one a supposed first date. IF you continue writing, you need to think realistically as to how things will occur. Then write your story in a realistic manner, it will be more believable. Your story is pretty god for a novice.

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