All Comments on 'Karmina'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
You should..

Keep it up; there's lots of possibilities for this power. You can even add antagonists, others with this power, or maybe women who aren't affected by this and make it their goal to tharwt him.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
gotta admit,

that this series has some serious potential, i hope you keep it up!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Goddd Yes!

Sooo good! The other comments were right. This story has a lot of potential to be even bigger!

I loved the ending! That was great!

C_frommnC_frommnalmost 13 years ago
Love the Story

You should deffinately consider doing more chapters and let everyone see how he uses his Power at home. and at work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

That was great - really hope you do more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Absolutely fucking great

Oh wonderful the power of the cunt

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

It could have been better if you had choosen some other words for commands. Hearing bitch repeatedly three times every sentence just sounded crude, and set a strange mood for the story.

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