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by greenmountaineer06/26/11

Powerful

But disturbing. It made me think of the anti-Christ myth, but perhaps my imagination got the best of me.

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by SweetOblivion06/29/11

Imaginative

but, though relevant, I'm not sure borrowing a famous phrase directly from Shakespeare's Macbeth necessarily adds to the piece. S.O.

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