by AvaLyn
That was pretty damn good. A little short, but never the less, pretty good.
A bit short, but very hot. Al The single sentence double-spacing looks and flows oddly, but that's an aesthetic thing.
That was pretty hot. Yeah, a little short, but you didn't drag it out.
Thanks for the comments! I have no idea why it double spaced, I didn't write it that way.
This is a good start. I am looking forward to further stories between these two friends.