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The World of Swing - A Step Forward

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by Anonymous

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by chootkabhoot07/01/11

sickening

are these creatures normal human beings?? why get married?

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by Toledocouple07/01/11

Loving

A great story about 2 peopl who love each other to enjoy simple pleasures of life together. Well written!

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by RyeandGingerAyle07/01/11

Good premise, but...

...for my taste there was waaaaaaaaaaaay too much dialogue.

RyeandGingerAyle

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by Duna07/03/11

What is etical?

If they do is with mutual agreement not on the street in front of children, without STD, without humiliation,without not DNA proof children, etc, therefore they do not hurt human beings, I think they do it etical! From this it is not our busines. BTW it is not my lifestyle.

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by shaun407/03/11

good story

really good fantasy i think you could keep the tale going and build the characters

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by Sympathyforthedevil04/09/12

Love the build up

I love how you build up the tension, and yet cut to the chase quite fast without having loads of irritating backstory. Amazing!

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by apple120702/14/16

Lovely hot story what I would love to do someday

Ohj what a hot wondeful story something I would love to do, so hot and sexy

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