All Comments on 'Lights, Camera, Romance 05'

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bambi37bambi37over 12 years ago
Excellent!!!

can't wait for the next installment can you make them longer I just love this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Love this story...

But the chapters are too short!!!

StMaartenFreakStMaartenFreakover 12 years ago
great BUT

This series is really good BUT they're wayyy too short and it seems like you focusing so much on Jen's friend Emma or whatever her name is. I came on here to read about an interracial love story between a BLACK girl and a WHITE man not the other way around which is Jen's friend relationship. So can you please focus more on Jen and Daniel cause the other two people Emma (I have no idea what her name is) and Daniel's best friend are both really boring. FOCUS on JEN's and DANIEL's RELATIONSHIP!

hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyover 12 years ago
Again!!!

really again your a freakin tease and you know it wow!

great update Ella and Eddie are killing me but what a way to die.

I can't wait to find out what happens with Jen and Daniel.

Love4wordsLove4wordsover 12 years ago
I personnaly don't agree with them

As long as you update like this then I don't care if they short. I think thy need to realise that there's authors who right the size of 2 of your chapters and then won. Update for 2 weeks or so. To me your doing terrific

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I like it

I agree with Love4words - if you update frequently then I don't care as much that the chapters are shorter.

Also, despite the earlier complaint to the contrary, I like both couples and am interested to see how the dynamics play out. I agree that Jen and Daniel have been a little more fleshed out so far, but you did a great job adding some more complexity to Ella with this chapter and I think you have plenty of time to add more if you are interested in doing so (and if you want to make the overall story shorter and keep her less complex, that's valid also).

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Another great update thanks for updating so frequently. I'm liking the story so far. I could be wrong but I was under the impression that the foucus of this story was suppose to be about Jen and Danny relationship. So far it's been more about Ella and Eddie. I'd love to see more interaction between Danny and Jen and more foucus on their relationship.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Which one...

Is this about Eddie and Ella or Jen and Daniel?

trinisamplertrinisamplerover 12 years ago
yay!!

as long as you keep posting as quickly as you do i am gonna be happy!!

i love, love, the interaction between the two couples!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
good so far...

I think this is the best chapter you've posted.

If you update daily this would be fantastic... don't keep us hanging.

This sounds like a crazy love story.

*****

IndianPrincess2IndianPrincess2over 12 years ago

Woo Wee can you say let the games begin looking forward to the next update thanks!!

NightpleasureNightpleasureover 12 years ago

please stop the teasing. this story is wonderful

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
cliffhanger

stop leaving these cliffhanger please and thank you

sebastainannduransebastainannduranover 12 years ago
"Now that's what i'm talkin about!"

I don't have a problem with some of the stories that are sexual from start to finish, but from the eighties and back porn ficks use to be full movies with a begining a middle and a end. You got yourself a real full story that reads just as if you were watching a movie. We all will be waiting for the movie to continue.

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