All Comments on 'A Bad Date Ch. 01'

very hot more !!!!

very well written we def need more

please keep writing give more details love where you are going with this

Wish I knew where they were. Agree with others, story needs a ending... Very nice

Four chapters are planned. The second one is gonna be a really rough one with some BDSM stuff.

By the way, many stories of mine won't be here due to its content!!!

I decided to improve one of my old stories to submit it. Editing was subtle but it was here and there and one extract I had to edit considerably, adding many sentences and improving the scene :)

I am so turned on reading this! Great story... just wish it didn't end on a cliffhanger.

As long as the characters are over 18, I'm pretty sure that you can post anything on lit. But, if we can't find your stories here, where can we find them?

My last story I have submitted here (A bad love) was banned here for extreme stuff. As I understood, the moderators didn't like that I mentioned that a girl's ass and pussy were too small for a guy's cock and there was some blood. And there was some sort of rape that the girl didn't enjoy. I just tried to sound it realistic not a victim enjoying her rape.

Probably, the second chapter for "A bad date" would be banned too, because it was going to be with a torturing rape due to crocodile clips on intimate parts and there would be scratches and a bit of blood from it.

Send me e-mail at sluttish_88@yahoo.com and I'll send the story.

I wrote many stories but I have been revising them for a better reading.

There are stories where persons are under 18 because I considered it was natural when a young girl (not a kid) has a rush on a senior.

I love this story. Please email me any stories you may have to mryanishot@gmail.com Thanks Bob

I wanna know what happens!

Paul this, Paul that, can Paul ever fuck off?