All Comments on 'Talent'

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HoosierFriendHoosierFriendalmost 13 years ago
Yes!

Man - that was pretty damn hot. As close to the perfect head job as I have ever read - until the last two paragraphs. I would like to read how she (?) finished off the last guy. Maybe swallowed a little . . . .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Member?

Does anyone really say 'member'?

So, don't write it. It sounds stupid.

Thunderhead69Thunderhead69almost 13 years ago
Hot!!

One of the best descriptions yet of how it feels to give and receive a great blowjob! Thanks for writing.

Corpse_riderCorpse_rideralmost 13 years ago
Great Talent

A very well written scene with a top rate descriptive rendering of oral sex. And commendably avoiding the use of the word 'cock'.

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleover 11 years ago
Nice story...short tho

It could easily go gay!

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Jason and Liz enjoy writing stories together. Liz helps out with the female perspective, Jason puts it all together. Hope you enjoy reading as much as we did writing.

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