You've Been Flirting Again Ch. 02

I loved it! Cant wait for me, its an amazing story.

Your writing style

Is fuckin awesomesauce...I'm using that btw ;-D Keep up the good work!

I dont know what she's talking about

Your wrting style sucks in my opinion. Probably just this story beccause of how stupid the man character is acting and hoW you make transtion for her to make a big decision.

@love4words

if you didn't read the previous chapter, of course you don't know what i'm talking about. if you did, i respect your opinion, but i don't see how you can't understand what i'm saying.

Good Lord...

Urban Outfitters, Bon Iver, Delorean, The Mars Volta, etc...this is seriously the most hipster story I've ever read.

As a self-professed "I'm too cool for the hipster label" hipster I definitely appreciate your story. It's cute, awkward, and funny. I'm digging your writing style and music tastes. I swear, you drop some Beach House, Washed Out, or Toro Y Moi in there and I just might marry you. Good job.

However, my side eye is locked on you for that jibe against The Weeknd. :)

Can't wait for the next chapter.

--nerd4music.

@nerd4music

thanks lol yeah i know i'm pretty label-less too, but i guess if someone called me a hipster they would be accurate? idk lol. and don't worry i actually like the weeknd. ;)

*****

Very well written.

Five.

****

I'm loving it so far! I really appreciate that your main character is not your stereotypical "black girl" which I can really relate to since I'm not that either. Also she has a white boy fetish which I have also lol:D. Even though I don't know MOST of the bands that she listens to I'm pretty sure that I would love them. She really should drop her BF especially since he's a fan of Wiz Khalifa BLAH! Lol I hope you will be updating soon!

love it

*****

UPDATE SOON!!!!!

Yeah

Hope your next ch. comes up soon because, Roy is an ass and Chris seems so sweet.

yup

She deserved it and should have been straight from the get go

heh

i really like this so far, but the hype on music is a little annoying. everything else rocks!

GAH

really love this. But, that's what she gets, knew she'd get caught in the lie by one of them or both.

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I really liked it but to keep downing one culture just because you see yourself as different or dont like the same things is annoying. I hate her personality. I'll pass.