Alex, I just read Once Bitten, and I see a pattern already in that one and this. Once Bitten was so sad, but I have to appreciate the honesty in expressing another type of situation that DOES happen.
With this story I felt like a voyeur, which was enjoyable since that's kinda what I am. The details were wonderfully erotic, especially since I love rimming. Very nice.
Then the other similarity I noticed with this and Once Bitten, so far, is how they end ! I feel like I'm missing out on something. When I'm introduced to a character, I love to stay connected so when it ends kind of abruptly with these two, its as if they just .. left ! Maybe that's the point, for their presence to linger mysteriously, but I'm just saying how I feel. =]
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YAY! IM YOUR FIRST! i get to comment first. i loved the story. very erotic and well written
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Aw, dinkyboots, I'm here, haha.
Alex, I just read Once Bitten, and I see a pattern already in that one and this. Once Bitten was so sad, but I have to appreciate the honesty in expressing another type of situation that DOES happen.
With this story I felt like a voyeur, which was enjoyable since that's kinda what I am. The details were wonderfully erotic, especially since I love rimming. Very nice.
Then the other similarity I noticed with this and Once Bitten, so far, is how they end ! I feel like I'm missing out on something. When I'm introduced to a character, I love to stay connected so when it ends kind of abruptly with these two, its as if they just .. left ! Maybe that's the point, for their presence to linger mysteriously, but I'm just saying how I feel. =]
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