great story, well written with a lot of detail (although you can guess I wanted to hear more about the emo Chuck being peer on!) can't wait to jerk off to the next intallment. let me know when you post it!
I can tell by the way your story ended that there will be a continuation to it. I can also tell by your wonderfully fertile imagination that it will be equally as hot. I gave you 5 stars!
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Anonymous06/30/11
wow
Amazing, it takes a really good story for me to reread it and get myself off. Great job!
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Anonymous06/30/11
Very entertaining
I was very interested until the end, and I hope you decide to continue this series, as it would be a tremendous waste to leave us hanging like so.
I think the subjectheader spelled it out quite nicely. I really do hope that you go further with this storyline. If not, ah well.. just keep me posted on your next piece of work. You just set yourself a new standard for self-excellence buddy.
As much as I enjoyed this, though, I have to say the main character is such a generic character. His looks and past in the military are so cliche I want to bash my head into a wall, and his player attitude makes me want to roll my eyes.
That aside, this is really descriptive, although the sex could've been a bit more descriptive. The blowjobs were done very well, though!
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Anonymous07/09/11
Good and bad
I liked the idea of the story. I thought "accidentally" getting a blow job from your sister would be silly or stupid, but it actually worked well. As a previous commenter stated, the blow job descriptions were great.
What I didn't like was the main character. He came off as cocky and unlikeable.
Overall, I liked more than I disliked about it.
by
Anonymous07/27/11
EXCELLENT!
The story is Excellent...
However it seems incomplete... The ending is too open... A sequel would be much appreciated... Great Work!
by
Anonymous09/10/11
MORE
STOP BEING A TEASE AND GIVE UP LOL... PLEASE CUM TO A FULL CIRCLE.... CONTINUE THE STORY.. THANKS
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Anonymous10/14/11
MORE
MORE! MORE! MAKE HIM NAIL HER HARD NAAAAAiL HEEER HAAARD!
AND IN FRONT OF EVERYONE INCLUDING A FAMILY MEMBER WHO DOESNT KNOW ITS THEM! MAKE IT SO THE FAMILY MEMBER CAN BARELY SEE THEM FROM FAR AWAY MAKE HIM WEAR A MASK AND MAKE HER SCREAM OUT HIS NAME.
ALSO MAKE A STORY ABOUT HIM AND HIS SISTER FIXING THE "BACK DOOR" ON THE BACKYARD SHED AT HOME.
DO IT PLEASE! FOR THE LOVE OF GOD FINISH AND CONTINUE THIS STORY!
This was a very hot story and did the trick... It made me cum on cue right at the end ! Nice timing! I wonder if this kind of thing really goes on. If so I guess I shoulda pledged a frat instead of living in a dorm!
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Anonymous05/02/12
Epic
Super entertaining, really much more like a story then just a porno. Good job
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Anonymous06/05/12
Ugh...
The story is okay, but there are some bits that just drag it down.
First off... Yet another story featuring a main character that's a jock with a giant cock? Can we please put this cliche out to pasture and let it die already?
Second... Fraternities with orgies going on almost every weekend. Someone has never been to a real frat party. Or gotten really drunk, for that matter. The amounts of alcohol consumed here would kill someone. Really. It's called alcohol poisoning.
Third (and this is just a pet peeve)... If you're going to use a quote, like the one from the Barney character on How I Met Your Mother, for the love of God get it right. It is NOT "wait for it... fucking legendary." The character says "legen... wait for it... dary." Misquoting like that just proves you aren't even capable of typing someone else's lines properly.
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Anonymous07/04/12
Great story
I loved it !! And for the people who are so critical of the writer, why dont you write your own story if your so brilliant ?
This really could have been a good story. Had it not been so unbelievably stupidly unbelievable it would have been great. You have a girl who is wholesome and all that, running out of the room because she sucked her brothers dick yet the next day she is sucking 20+ dicks and would be happy sucking his dick forever. And the frat party orgy, wtf that never happens. Sure, they get a little wild at times but walk in the kitchen and find a girl fucking herself with a cucumber? No. The story was written like it was intended to be believable. It wasn't, not even by a stretch of the imagination.
It's a story, not a documentary. I enjoyed it immensely. I loved the accidental blow job. I would have handled the lunch time disclosure differently, and I think having Anthony watching Lilly from afar doing her exhibitionism skit would have been exciting. Then have him find her blind folded doing her out back blow jobs. But all in all, reading CCS -1 was fun and exciting. Great story!
Every guy who's had a sister like this would love to have her perform this way. ;-)
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Anonymous11/12/14
Even the evil appear to love their own family
The level of evil described in this story is beyond comprehension. Truly sickening.
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Anonymous01/23/15
You can't stop here!!!!
What a pair of fucktales!!!!! If our hero's sister sucks cock that well - I can't imagine how well she FUCKS cock!!!!!!!!
Please, SSL, don't leave us out here with rock hard dicks - we have to get our hotshot fucked by his sexy cocksucker sister - who knows - she may fuck better than she sucks!!!!!!
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Anonymous02/23/15
I found it...
... pretty boring
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Anonymous04/01/15
interesting
My sister and I were at a party a year ago and all the women drew names out of a bowl for a suck buddy. They had to take their top off and suck the guy's dick in front of everybody.. They had to show the name to everyone else in the room. My sister drew my name. A few other people offered my sister the chance to draw another name and she said "No, this is the name I drew and I will suck my brother's dick." Well, she did and it was wonderful!!! She has been sucking it ever since and I have been eating her out. She gives me the best blowjobs I have ever had!!
Im ambivelant about the story... A guy below posted 'every guy would want a sister like this' or some such. I gotta say, no way would I be interested in my sister sucking me off after she's been blowing a bunch of guys. Zero appeal. ...setting asside gods know how many diseases the pair of them picked up over the two days, I dont mind a late model car but I dont want something that had lots of miles on it, and in this case a lease/rent model. Pass!
....but then again picking chicks up at a frat party was always a huge turnoff anyway. Kinda like ftrats in general. :/
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Awesome!!!!!
week ending
a great build up to a flat finish
MORE
Great first chapter
fuckin hott
great story, well written with a lot of detail (although you can guess I wanted to hear more about the emo Chuck being peer on!) can't wait to jerk off to the next intallment. let me know when you post it!
Superb
Cant wait for next chapter
Not The End
I can tell by the way your story ended that there will be a continuation to it. I can also tell by your wonderfully fertile imagination that it will be equally as hot. I gave you 5 stars!
wow
Amazing, it takes a really good story for me to reread it and get myself off. Great job!
Very entertaining
I was very interested until the end, and I hope you decide to continue this series, as it would be a tremendous waste to leave us hanging like so.
Looking forward to another, keep it up!
More, more more!
I thought this was an excellent beginning to an even better series - keep writing, this is one hot story line!
Nude Day?
Hot Story - but where's the nude day theme?
Fantabulous
I loved it! Please tell me more is cumming soon? ~Desi
more
more,more,more....
That was simply Fucking Amazing!!!
I think the subjectheader spelled it out quite nicely. I really do hope that you go further with this storyline. If not, ah well.. just keep me posted on your next piece of work. You just set yourself a new standard for self-excellence buddy.
Sizzling
Very hot story, good pace and very well written. Man I sure hope there's more to this.
Love it mom
Love it mommy
Yes, by all means more!
Please make a continuation if you haven't yet!
Amazing!
Please do more. It gave me a huge orgasm.
Also, LMAO @ the anon who called you mommy.
Good
As much as I enjoyed this, though, I have to say the main character is such a generic character. His looks and past in the military are so cliche I want to bash my head into a wall, and his player attitude makes me want to roll my eyes.
That aside, this is really descriptive, although the sex could've been a bit more descriptive. The blowjobs were done very well, though!
Good and bad
I liked the idea of the story. I thought "accidentally" getting a blow job from your sister would be silly or stupid, but it actually worked well. As a previous commenter stated, the blow job descriptions were great.
What I didn't like was the main character. He came off as cocky and unlikeable.
Overall, I liked more than I disliked about it.
EXCELLENT!
The story is Excellent...
However it seems incomplete... The ending is too open... A sequel would be much appreciated... Great Work!
MORE
STOP BEING A TEASE AND GIVE UP LOL... PLEASE CUM TO A FULL CIRCLE.... CONTINUE THE STORY.. THANKS
MORE
MORE! MORE! MAKE HIM NAIL HER HARD NAAAAAiL HEEER HAAARD!
AND IN FRONT OF EVERYONE INCLUDING A FAMILY MEMBER WHO DOESNT KNOW ITS THEM! MAKE IT SO THE FAMILY MEMBER CAN BARELY SEE THEM FROM FAR AWAY MAKE HIM WEAR A MASK AND MAKE HER SCREAM OUT HIS NAME.
ALSO MAKE A STORY ABOUT HIM AND HIS SISTER FIXING THE "BACK DOOR" ON THE BACKYARD SHED AT HOME.
DO IT PLEASE! FOR THE LOVE OF GOD FINISH AND CONTINUE THIS STORY!
DOOO IT!
Please write the Sequel !
Thank you :)
Enjoy this very much.
Author's Note
I am considering a sequel..anyone have suggestions???
Suggestions
Did you get the one I sent you in the feedback? It had suggestions about the possible sequel.
Let me know!
Amazing as always, when is the sequel coming
I would love to read about his plan, the execution of the plan, and how she begins to love the plan.
Simply excellent!
Timing
I enjoyed your story re Cocksucking College Sister. However, your submissions are so far apart, that I will not wait for futher subsissions.
.
[ I am considering a sequel..anyone have suggestions??? ]
Maby tell us about this great plan of he's?
Yeah!
This was a very hot story and did the trick... It made me cum on cue right at the end ! Nice timing! I wonder if this kind of thing really goes on. If so I guess I shoulda pledged a frat instead of living in a dorm!
Epic
Super entertaining, really much more like a story then just a porno. Good job
Ugh...
The story is okay, but there are some bits that just drag it down.
First off... Yet another story featuring a main character that's a jock with a giant cock? Can we please put this cliche out to pasture and let it die already?
Second... Fraternities with orgies going on almost every weekend. Someone has never been to a real frat party. Or gotten really drunk, for that matter. The amounts of alcohol consumed here would kill someone. Really. It's called alcohol poisoning.
Third (and this is just a pet peeve)... If you're going to use a quote, like the one from the Barney character on How I Met Your Mother, for the love of God get it right. It is NOT "wait for it... fucking legendary." The character says "legen... wait for it... dary." Misquoting like that just proves you aren't even capable of typing someone else's lines properly.
Great story
I loved it !! And for the people who are so critical of the writer, why dont you write your own story if your so brilliant ?
Could have been....
This really could have been a good story. Had it not been so unbelievably stupidly unbelievable it would have been great. You have a girl who is wholesome and all that, running out of the room because she sucked her brothers dick yet the next day she is sucking 20+ dicks and would be happy sucking his dick forever. And the frat party orgy, wtf that never happens. Sure, they get a little wild at times but walk in the kitchen and find a girl fucking herself with a cucumber? No. The story was written like it was intended to be believable. It wasn't, not even by a stretch of the imagination.
lool
this guy's mind is twisted
Please add more to this store.
wow
not real crazy about how he's treating his sister, but very hot sex thanks
I'm not a softie, but the way he treated his sister was awful.
He sounded kind of desperate to prove he's a stud. Yuck not hot.
It's a story, not a documentary. I enjoyed it immensely. I loved the accidental blow job. I would have handled the lunch time disclosure differently, and I think having Anthony watching Lilly from afar doing her exhibitionism skit would have been exciting. Then have him find her blind folded doing her out back blow jobs. But all in all, reading CCS -1 was fun and exciting. Great story!
i love a good blow job
such a great hot story.
Good read baby
Every guy who's had a sister like this would love to have her perform this way. ;-)
Even the evil appear to love their own family
The level of evil described in this story is beyond comprehension. Truly sickening.
You can't stop here!!!!
What a pair of fucktales!!!!! If our hero's sister sucks cock that well - I can't imagine how well she FUCKS cock!!!!!!!!
Please, SSL, don't leave us out here with rock hard dicks - we have to get our hotshot fucked by his sexy cocksucker sister - who knows - she may fuck better than she sucks!!!!!!
I found it...
... pretty boring
interesting
My sister and I were at a party a year ago and all the women drew names out of a bowl for a suck buddy. They had to take their top off and suck the guy's dick in front of everybody.. They had to show the name to everyone else in the room. My sister drew my name. A few other people offered my sister the chance to draw another name and she said "No, this is the name I drew and I will suck my brother's dick." Well, she did and it was wonderful!!! She has been sucking it ever since and I have been eating her out. She gives me the best blowjobs I have ever had!!
Im ambivelant about the story... A guy below posted 'every guy would want a sister like this' or some such. I gotta say, no way would I be interested in my sister sucking me off after she's been blowing a bunch of guys. Zero appeal. ...setting asside gods know how many diseases the pair of them picked up over the two days, I dont mind a late model car but I dont want something that had lots of miles on it, and in this case a lease/rent model. Pass!
....but then again picking chicks up at a frat party was always a huge turnoff anyway. Kinda like ftrats in general. :/
5*
and right to favorites.
Good till
I hate the blackies in ANY story!!! 1*
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